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Emote Story Project by Web5teR
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OK this is the first critique I've ever done on DA so hopefully I do ok. I love how you combined creative writing with an emote project...

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Emote Story Project by Web5teR
OK this is the first critique I've ever done on DA so hopefully I do ok. I love how you combined creative writing with an emote project. I feel it really makes this so much more than just another emote project. I write a lot myself and my favourite is just improv fun fantastical stories. The story flows well and is very imaginative. I also feel the emotes and story flow well together and actually makes sense. I think sometimes improv stories when lots of users are contributing can sometimes go way off anything that remotely makes sense, but I don't see that happening here. Really good job pulling it together.
This user is awesome, all her stuff rocks, you've got to check her out :)
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Time And Space

Journal Entry: Mon Apr 8, 2013, 2:28 PM
His soul is old
His face is new
She did not care
Her love was true
Through time and space
she stood by his side
No distance too far
No enemies too big
She vowed to herself
To be with him always
but the time lord's curse
Had other plans
Fate ripped them apart
There was no turning back
Their fates were sealed
As the rapture closed
But sometimes, just sometimes
A story doesn't end
It keeps on going
and beats the odds
She searched and she searched
for the man who travelled in blue
She never gave up hope
When the moment came
When it was finally time
She jumped on the chance
And ran to his side
She was determined
This time it would be different
This time nothing could rip her from him
The war raged on
They battled and they fought
And the time lord became two
In the end they won
Victorious as always
As he took her back
To her reality before the boundaries sealed
Another farewell had to be made
Tears fell from her face
She didn't want to go
But he tried to explain
This time was not the same
This time there were two
And though in his chest beat two
In the other's beat only one
A gift to his love
Someone to love her
but most importantly
Someone to grow old with her
In the blink of an eye
He returned to his box
And flew back to the stars
As the rapture again closed
From the beginning of time
His fate stays the same
Watching everyone else die
Destined to live to the end of time
When all that's left
In all of time and space
Is the man with the blue box
And his memories of those he loved 
And those he lost

                                                                                                                     

>.< not my best poem but oh well




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ucurmi Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Professional Photographer
Thank you for the daWatch :huggle: I have some really good pieces coming up! :D 

Have a great day! :)
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BachLynn23 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You are most welcome, I love all your stuff so I can't wait to see what you come out with in the future :)
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